Just taking it in another direction, I still think the images I have produced are too still and not mad enough! The bottom image is how the top image started out, although its upside down- sorry! Although this has been less drawing and more mess making, I really enjoyed the process, and think the outcome was quite successful. Rather than narrate the story, I'm trying to illustrate his emotions and thoughts, I think this way works better in doing that. Hmmm.